Being in the first year of the Bachelor after the first two blocks I really enjoy studying economics << rare zinquote:Op zondag 16 januari 2011 00:36 schreef mctwigt het volgende:
Kan iemand aanvulling geven en commentaar op deze brief?
Recently I read about the Bachelor Honours Class and immediately gained interest in the program. With this motivation letter I would like to apply for the Bachelor Honours class
First I would like to introduce myself. I am Mctwigt a student living in Rotterdam. After graduation of pre-university with the profile Economics and Society at the Comenius College I went to study Economics at the Erasmus University. Being in the first year of the Bachelor after the first two blocks I really enjoy studying economics. I would like to mention that I have Dyslexia but I don’t have any problem with it and it sure will not hold me back in doing what I want. I am also very inquisitive and that comes in handy when studying, because of this I do a lot of research to better understand certain aspects of the study and when I run into difficulties I don’t hesitate to ask others about it or try to figure it out on my own. am always very driven and sure about what I want. I am determined to achieve my goals.
The reason that I am interested in the Bachelor Honours Class is because I really like to extend my economic knowledge and have an extra challenge in addition to my study. I enjoy my study in Economics on the Erasmus University very much and have developed an interest in the field of economics. Even though I have dyslexia I like to challenge myself to go further explore my capabilities and broaden my knowledge of economics. When I had a conversation with my mentor he told me that with my grades the Bachelor Honours Class is possible and although my average grade is not an eight he told me that I could try to apply for participation. Being part of the Bachelour Honours Class also means being part of a group of motivated student who know what they want and having a better relationship with the science of economics and the Erasmus University. This is my reason for applying.
I think that I would do well in the Bachelor Honours Class, because I am a motivated student who is driven and straight forward. I am also a student who is determined and shows a large interest in economics and the surrounding aspect of the science, like mathematics for example. I see the Bachelor Honours Class as an expansion to that what I already know about economics and as an extra challenge next to my study. These are the reasons why I would like to be selected for the Bachelor Honours Class.
I would like to explain my interest in this position in person. Looking forward to your reaction.
De brief verstuur ik via de mail en de programme instructorsquote:eigen straat+huisnr
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To the admission board for the Bachelor Honours Class.
January 15th 2011
Dear sir, madame,
Recently I read about the Bachelor Honours Class and immediately gained interest in the program. With this motivation letter I would like to apply for the Bachelor Honours class
First I would like to introduce myself. I am NAAM a student living in Rotterdam. After graduation of pre-university with the profile Economie en Maatschappij at the Comenius College I went to study Economics at the Erasmus University. I got my heart set on accomplishing my goals and I am willing to do whatever it takes. I got a very inquisitive nature and because of this I do a lot of research to better understand certain aspects of the study and when I run into difficulties I do not hesitate to try and figure it out on my own or to ask others about it.
I am interested in the Bachelor Honours Class because I really want to extend my economic knowledge and have an extra challenge in addition to my study. I enjoy my study on Economics on the Erasmus University very much and have developed a much larger interest in the field of economics that when I applied for the study. Even though I have dyslexia I like to challenge myself to further explore my capabilities and broaden my knowledge of economics. I discussed applying for the Bachelor Honours Class with my mentor and he told me that with my grades the Bachelor Honours Class is possible. And although my grade average does not meet the required eight, my perseverance and genuine interest will hopefully be taken into account. Being part of the Bachelour Honours Class also means being part of a group of motivated students who know what they want and having a better appealing with the science of economics and the Erasmus University. This is my reason for applying.
I think that I would do well in the Bachelor Honours Class, because I am also a student who is determined and shows a large interest in economics and the surrounding aspect of the science. For me the Bachelor Honours Class would be a marvelous way to explore additional facets of Economics and quench my never-ending hunger for information. This is why I should be selected for the Bachelor Honours Class.
I would like to explain my interest in this position in person. And will be patiently waiting for a positive answer from your side.
(ik kwam ook deze nog tegen ergens en vond het wel professioneel klinken: Realizing the limitations of the written page, I would welcome the opportunity to participate in a personal interview to answers any of your questions and better present my qualifications. I look forward to speaking with you soon.)
Sincerely,
naam
studentnummer
Enclosures:
Resume
Grade list
Dit is het beste om te doen, want deze brief is veels te jip en janneke.quote:Op maandag 17 januari 2011 01:40 schreef finsdefis het volgende:
Ik wil niet lullig zijn, maar deze brief zou ook in de vernieuwde vorm meteen naar de prullenbak verwezen worden door menig Engelstalig instituut, nu is dat hierbij geloof ik niet het geval dus dat scheelt. Ik wil er best opbouwende kritiek van maken, maar het feit is dat het moeilijker is om zoiets te corrigeren dan om het helemaal opnieuw te schrijven.
Als je toevallig iemand kent die Engels is of het studeert oid zou ik het even door laten lezen op grammaticale fouten en samenhang, dat is voornamelijk de reden waarom ik zei dat het naar de prullenbak verwezen zou worden, inhoudelijk is het best redelijk. In ieder geval zou ik je zinnen wat meer aan elkaar koppelen en zaken zoals dat je het met je mentor besproken hebt eruit laten, dat is voor hun niet zo relevant. Misschien wat meer vertellen over hoe je denkt dat de Honoursclasses je gaan helpen bij je ontwikkeling. Je kan trouwens ook beter je laatste suggestie voor een afsluitende zin gebruiken, denk ik.
Dat...quote:Op maandag 17 januari 2011 01:40 schreef finsdefis het volgende:
Ik wil niet lullig zijn, maar deze brief zou ook in de vernieuwde vorm meteen naar de prullenbak verwezen worden door menig Engelstalig instituut, nu is dat hierbij geloof ik niet het geval dus dat scheelt. Ik wil er best opbouwende kritiek van maken, maar het feit is dat het moeilijker is om zoiets te corrigeren dan om het helemaal opnieuw te schrijven.
Als je toevallig iemand kent die Engels is of het studeert oid zou ik het even door laten lezen op grammaticale fouten en samenhang, dat is voornamelijk de reden waarom ik zei dat het naar de prullenbak verwezen zou worden, inhoudelijk is het best redelijk. In ieder geval zou ik je zinnen wat meer aan elkaar koppelen en zaken zoals dat je het met je mentor besproken hebt eruit laten, dat is voor hun niet zo relevant. Misschien wat meer vertellen over hoe je denkt dat de Honoursclasses je gaan helpen bij je ontwikkeling. Je kan trouwens ook beter je laatste suggestie voor een afsluitende zin gebruiken, denk ik.
Naar mijn mening zouden ze nu wat langer wachten met in de prullenbak gooien, maar ja dat is mijn mening En gezien mijn Engels in het begin is dat denk ik wel met een flinke schuit zout te nemen. Ik vind het typen va neen Engelse brief wel kut, gezien ik hier nooit vaak mee heb geoefend op dit niveau... Op de middelbare kreeg ik met wat simpele jip en janneke taal met een 7.5. Ik schrok zelf wel toen ik mijn brief herlas van de OP, gezien ik toch veel Engels lees zou je denken dat een brief dan wel te doen is... notquote:eigen Straat+huisnr
postcode+plaats
To the admission board for the Bachelor Honours Class.
January 15th, 2011
Dear (persoon aan wie gericht)
Recently I have read some information on the Bachelor Honours Class and I immediately gained interest in the program. In this letter of motivation I would like to apply myself for the Bachelor Honours class
First I would like to introduce myself. I am NAAM and I am a student living in Rotterdam. After my graduation of pre-university secondary school in subjects concerning Economics and Society (Dutch name: Economie en Maatschappij) at the Comenius College I started to study Economics at the Erasmus University. I got my heart set on accomplishing my goals and I am willing to do whatever it takes. I got a very inquisitive nature and because of this I do a lot of research to better understand certain aspects of the subjects taught and when I run into difficulties I do not hesitate to try and figure it out on my own or to ask others about it.
I am interested in the Bachelor Honours Class since I truly want to extend my economic knowledge and I would like to have an extra challenge in addition to my studies. Following intense and interactive lectures by experts in the fields of economics is something that really got my interest. I enjoy my studies on Economics on the Erasmus University very much and I have developed a much larger interest in the field of economics then before I applied for Economics. Even though I have dyslexia I like to challenge myself to further explore my capabilities and broaden my knowledge of economics. I have discussed applying for the Bachelor Honours Class with my mentor and he told me that with my grades the Bachelor Honours Class is possible. Although my grade average does not meet the required eight, my perseverance and genuine interest will hopefully be taken into account. Being part of the Bachelour Honours Class also means being part of a group of motivated students that knows what they want and that feels a stronger connection with the science of economics and the Erasmus University.
I think that I would do well in the Bachelor Honours Class, as I am a student who is determined and shows a large interest in economics and the surrounding aspect of the science. For me the Bachelor Honours Class would be a marvelous way to explore additional facets of Economics and quench my never-ending desire for information. These are a few reasons why I believe I should be selected for the Bachelor Honours Class.
Realizing the limitations of the written page, I would welcome the opportunity to participate in a personal interview to answer any of your questions and better present my qualifications. I look forward to speaking with you soon
Yours sincerely,
NAAM
Enclosures:
Resume
Grade list
zoals?quote:
Zoietsquote:Recently I have (moet past simple zijn) read some information on the Bachelor Honours Class and I immediately gained interest in the program. In this letter of motivation I would like to apply myself for the Bachelor Honours class. <-punt
First of all I would like to introduce myself. I am (my name is is netter) NAAM and I am a student living in Rotterdam. After I graduated secondary school in subjects concerning Economics and Society (Dutch name: Economie en Maatschappij) at the Comenius College, <- komma I started embarked on an Economics study (denk ik) at the Erasmus University. I got have (netter) my heart set on accomplishing my goals and I am willing to do whatever it takes. I got have a very inquisitive nature and because of this I do a lot of research to improve my understanding of certain aspects of the subjects taught and when I run into difficulties I do not hesitate to try and figure it out on my own or to ask others about it.
I am interested in the Bachelor Honours Class since I truly want to extend my economic knowledge and I would like to have an extra challenge in addition to my studies. Following intense and interactive lectures by experts in the fields of economics is something that really got has my interest. I enjoy my studies on Economics on at the Erasmus University very much and I have developed a much larger interest in the field of economics then than before I applied for Economics. Even though I have dyslexia I like to challenge myself to further explore my capabilities and broaden my knowledge of economics. I have discussed applying for the Bachelor Honours Class with my mentor and he told me that with my grades the Bachelor Honours Class is possible (a possibility?). Although my grade average does not meet the required eight, my perseverance and genuine interest will hopefully be taken into account. Being part of the Bachelor Honours Class also means being part of a group of motivated students that who know what they want [[and that feels a stronger connection with the science of economics and the Erasmus University. ]] <- deze zin is fout, ik weet niet wat je hier probeert duidelijk te maken.
I think that I would do well in the Bachelor Honours Class, as I am a student who is determined and shows a large interest in economics and the surrounding aspect of the science. For me the Bachelor Honours Class would be a marvellous way to explore additional facets of Economics and quench my never-ending desire for information. These are a few reasons why I believe I should be selected for the Bachelor Honours Class.
Realizing the limitations of the written page, I would welcome the opportunity to participate in a personal interview to answer any of your questions and present my qualifications in a better way. I look forward to speaking with you soon
quote:After my Bachelor of Economics I would like to embark on a research master. Becoming a researcher is one of the goals I have in my life, and being part of the Honours Class is somthing that will help me becoming a researcher.
Ik zou zeggen: Is one of my goals in lifequote:Op zaterdag 22 januari 2011 18:16 schreef mctwigt het volgende:
Ik wou het volgende nog in mijn brief stoppen.
Is dit zo goed geschreven?:
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