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Dear Sir/Madam,
Two weeks I ago placed an order in your online shop (Kundennummer: 8591 & Bestellnummer: 19902). A couple of days later I received the terms of payment.
The reason why I send you this e-mail is because I can’t pay yet.
Last week I’ve chanced from bank, but my money is still not on my new bank number, so that’s why I can’t pay you yet.
As soon as I have my money I will send it to you.
I hope that you don’t cancel my order.
Yours faithfully,
Hij klopt niet!!
Het is vet gebrekkig!!
Ik wil dus een mailotje sturen omdat ik nog niet kan betalen, omdat ik van bank ben gewisseld, en mijn geld niet op mijn nieuwe rekening nog staat...
Zien jullie ergens fouten? Of wat er zeker verbeterd kan worden??
Two weeks I ago placed an order in your online shop (Kundennummer: 8591 & Bestellnummer: 19902). A couple of days later I received the terms of payment.
The reason why I send you this e-mail is because I can’t pay yet.
Last week I’ve chanced from bank, but my money is still not on my new bank number, so that’s why I can’t pay you yet.
As soon as I have my money I will send it to you.
I hope that you don’t cancel my order.
Yours faithfully,
Hij klopt niet!!
Het is vet gebrekkig!!
Ik wil dus een mailotje sturen omdat ik nog niet kan betalen, omdat ik van bank ben gewisseld, en mijn geld niet op mijn nieuwe rekening nog staat...
Zien jullie ergens fouten? Of wat er zeker verbeterd kan worden??
Hey Buttheadquote:Op dinsdag 9 maart 2004 18:57 schreef Freaky_pauwie het volgende:
Wie helpt mij deze brief beter te maken??
give me my fucking money now or I will destroy you and your family,
you motherfucker you!
With Love,
Freaky Pauwie.
Is dat wat?
quote:Op dinsdag 9 maart 2004 19:00 schreef SunChaser het volgende:
Hey Butthead
give me my fucking money now or I will destroy you and your family,
you motherfucker you!
With Love,
Freaky Pauwie.
Is dat wat?
Ik vind het wel wat, maar denk dat ze daar niet al te blij zullen zijn dan,
en dat ik mn schaapie deken nooit krijg!!
Humorquote:Op dinsdag 9 maart 2004 19:00 schreef SunChaser het volgende:
[..]
Hey Butthead
...
Is dat wat?
"The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
"The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once."
"The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once."
formele brief is niet afkorten, dus can not, I have enz enz.. en dr is nog wel meer te verbeteren maar dat laat ik aan de rest over.
Het moet een trieste dag voor je zijn als je hoort dat ik beter van je ben gewend.quote:Op dinsdag 9 maart 2004 19:00 schreef SunChaser het volgende:
Hey Butthead
give me my fucking money now or I will destroy you and your family,
you motherfucker you!
With Love,
Freaky Pauwie.
Is dat wat?
Ik ga naar huis.
Volgens mij is dit beter:
The reason why I send you this e-mail --> The reason that I send this e-mail
The reason why I send you this e-mail --> The reason that I send this e-mail
"The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
"The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once."
"The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once."
Volgens mij kan je beter een brief in het duits sturen
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Daar heb je ook gelijk inquote:Op dinsdag 9 maart 2004 19:04 schreef SunChaser het volgende:
Die hele eerste zin kan wel weg, begin gewoon met Last Week
"The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources."
"The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once."
"The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once."
chance -->change
can't--> am not able to
Last week I've changed accounts to a different bank. However but my money still hasnt been transferred to my new account. This obstructs me in my payment.
As soon as my money arives I will send it to you.
I hope you don't cancel my order
can't--> am not able to
Last week I've changed accounts to a different bank. However but my money still hasnt been transferred to my new account. This obstructs me in my payment.
As soon as my money arives I will send it to you.
I hope you don't cancel my order
changedquote:Op dinsdag 9 maart 2004 18:57 schreef Freaky_pauwie het volgende:
Last week I’ve chanced from bank,
Dear Sir/Madam,
Two weeks I ago placed an order in your online shop (Kundennummer: 8591 & Bestellnummer: 19902), about which I received the terms of payment a couple of days later.
However, I changed banks last week, and the bank hasn't transferred my money yet to my new account. Because of this, I am unable to pay for my order at the time of our original agreement. I am still interested in the item.
I hope that you don’t cancel my order. Dear Sir/Madam,
Two weeks I ago placed an order in your online shop (Kundennummer: 8591 & Bestellnummer: 19902). A couple of days later I received the terms of payment.
The reason why I send you this e-mail is because I can’t pay yet.
Last week I’ve chanced from bank, but my money is still not on my new bank number, so that’s why I can’t pay you yet.
As soon as I have my money I will send it to you. Please don't cancel my order, I will transfer the money as soon as possible, and hope to receive the item shortly.
Yours faithfully,
Yours faithfully,
Two weeks I ago placed an order in your online shop (Kundennummer: 8591 & Bestellnummer: 19902), about which I received the terms of payment a couple of days later.
However, I changed banks last week, and the bank hasn't transferred my money yet to my new account. Because of this, I am unable to pay for my order at the time of our original agreement. I am still interested in the item.
I hope that you don’t cancel my order. Dear Sir/Madam,
Two weeks I ago placed an order in your online shop (Kundennummer: 8591 & Bestellnummer: 19902). A couple of days later I received the terms of payment.
The reason why I send you this e-mail is because I can’t pay yet.
Last week I’ve chanced from bank, but my money is still not on my new bank number, so that’s why I can’t pay you yet.
As soon as I have my money I will send it to you. Please don't cancel my order, I will transfer the money as soon as possible, and hope to receive the item shortly.
Yours faithfully,
Yours faithfully,
Anatidaephobia
The fear that somewhere, somehow, a duck is watching you.
The fear that somewhere, somehow, a duck is watching you.
Laat ik eens een poging doen.. zoiets?
quote:Dear Sir/Madam,
Two weeks ago I placed an order at your online shop (Kundennummer: 8591 & Bestellnummer: 19902). A few days later I received the terms of payment.
Unfortunatly I can not furfill the payment at this point for I am having some issues with my bank.
Last week I have switched to a different bank, but my money hasn't been transferred to my new account yet.
As soon as this issue is resolved I will furfill the payment.
Yours faithfully,
"Religion. A daughter of Hope and Fear, explaining to Ignorance the nature of the Unknowable."
Ambroce Bierce
Ambroce Bierce
Huldequote:Op dinsdag 9 maart 2004 19:07 schreef roobje het volgende:
Laat ik eens een poging doen.. zoiets?
[..]
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Online Marketing voor Profootballspot.com | Arizona Cardinals [T] @spot_cardinals en NFL Draft [T] @spotdraft
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quote:Dear Sir/Madam,
Two weeks ago, I placed ordered some items in your online shop (Kundennummer: 8591 & Bestellnummer: 19902). A few days later (beter is om het specifieke aantal te noemen) I received the terms of payment.
However, due to a change of banks, I am not able to fulfill the payment yet. The money from my old bank account has not yet been transferred to the new account.
As soon as the money has been transferred, I will fulfill the payment and transfer the money to your account
Hoping to have informed you sufficiently,
Sincerely yours,
<Insert Name>
Ik geloof dat "The reason for sending this e-mail.." het beste is maar 'the reason why' is beter dan 'the reason that' lijkt me. Dat laatste is echt een letterlijke vertaling uit het Nederlands en dat is vaak niet helemaal correct.quote:Op dinsdag 9 maart 2004 19:04 schreef Dododo het volgende:
Volgens mij is dit beter:
The reason why I send you this e-mail --> The reason that I send this e-mail
"Religion. A daughter of Hope and Fear, explaining to Ignorance the nature of the Unknowable."
Ambroce Bierce
Ambroce Bierce
THANK YOUUU!!!quote:Op dinsdag 9 maart 2004 19:06 schreef wadgem het volgende:
Dear Sir/Madam,
Two weeks I ago placed an order in your online shop (Kundennummer: 8591 & Bestellnummer: 19902), about which I received the terms of payment a couple of days later.
However, I changed banks last week, and the bank hasn't transferred my money yet to my new account. Because of this, I am unable to pay for my order at the time of our original agreement. I am still interested in the item.
I hope that you don’t cancel my order. Dear Sir/Madam,
Two weeks I ago placed an order in your online shop (Kundennummer: 8591 & Bestellnummer: 19902). A couple of days later I received the terms of payment.
The reason why I send you this e-mail is because I can’t pay yet.
Last week I’ve chanced from bank, but my money is still not on my new bank number, so that’s why I can’t pay you yet.
As soon as I have my money I will send it to you. Please don't cancel my order, I will transfer the money as soon as possible, and hope to receive the item shortly.
Yours faithfully,
Yours faithfully,
Oh zie nu pas dat het over een Duitse webshop gaat, dan maakt het geen ruk uit hoe brak het Engels is want ze kunnen er zelf toch ook helemaal niks van (over het algemeen dan)
(over het algemeen dan)
"Religion. A daughter of Hope and Fear, explaining to Ignorance the nature of the Unknowable."
Ambroce Bierce
Ambroce Bierce
Dear Sir/Madam,
Two weeks I ago have placed an order in your online shop (Kundennummer: 8591 & Bestellnummer: 19902). A couple of days later I have received the terms of payment.
The reason that I send you this e-mail is because I have difficulties meeting the terms of payment due to the fact that I recently changed my bank account. Unfortunately the money has not been transferred from my old to my new account yet, while my old account is allready inactive.
I hope you can find the patience to wait a little longer and I would appreciate it very much if you would not cancel my order. I guarantee you that once them money has been transferred to my new bank account, I will pay you immediately.
Yours faithfully
[ Bericht 0% gewijzigd door Femmepire op 09-03-2004 19:22:50 ]
Two weeks I ago have placed an order in your online shop (Kundennummer: 8591 & Bestellnummer: 19902). A couple of days later I have received the terms of payment.
The reason that I send you this e-mail is because I have difficulties meeting the terms of payment due to the fact that I recently changed my bank account. Unfortunately the money has not been transferred from my old to my new account yet, while my old account is allready inactive.
I hope you can find the patience to wait a little longer and I would appreciate it very much if you would not cancel my order. I guarantee you that once them money has been transferred to my new bank account, I will pay you immediately.
Yours faithfully
[ Bericht 0% gewijzigd door Femmepire op 09-03-2004 19:22:50 ]
Ik vind die van InTrePidIvity (ff copy/paste gedaan hoor!) het beste tot nu toe
"Religion. A daughter of Hope and Fear, explaining to Ignorance the nature of the Unknowable."
Ambroce Bierce
Ambroce Bierce
Is Yours faithfully niet een beetje familiair Ik ben helemaal niet trouw aan die mensen, zolang ze die spullen maar ASAP opsturen...
Ik ben helemaal niet trouw aan die mensen, zolang ze die spullen maar ASAP opsturen...
Sincerely lijkt me ook beter nu je het zegt.. ik heb eigenlijk alleen naar de spelfouten en foute constructies gekeken
"Religion. A daughter of Hope and Fear, explaining to Ignorance the nature of the Unknowable."
Ambroce Bierce
Ambroce Bierce
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