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Volgens mij is daar niet een recent topic voor , maar zitten de mensen hier wel met genoeg creativiteit/inspiratie.

En normaal begint de TS ja...
Ik zal morgen dan ook een zelf gefabriceerde tekst posten.

I'm the hardest button to button.
#onz, de vrijhaven.
Self improvement is masturbation.
pi_17039546
Een jaar of 4 geleden geschreven op een Modern Talking-melodie. Slaat nergens op en heeft dus een hoog Bohlen-gehalte

My Lonely Heart Is Crying Mayday

couplet 1
I'm sailing on your oceans
I'm sailing on your love
I'm living with emotions
Oh I can't get enough
But now this ship is sinking
I don't know what to do
And I am only thinking
Love's ment for me and you

refrein
My lonely heart is crying mayday
Oh baby please don't go away
My lonely heart is crying mayday
Listen what I have to say
hoog refrein
Mayday, maybay, listen to me
My ship of love is sinking to the bottom of your sea
Mayday, mayday, hear my heart
Babe why can't we try a brandnew start?

couplet 2
I don't know what to do girl
Oh I belong to you
You were and are my whole world
But now you're gone, it's true
I'm helpless and I'm lonely
I don't know what to do
For me you are the only
Love's ment for me and you


pi_17040619
Voor een zelf geschreven love-song is het toch wel vrij aardig.
I'm the hardest button to button.
#onz, de vrijhaven.
Self improvement is masturbation.
pi_17040796
Thnx
pi_17041322
Ik heb hier een paar liggen, zelfs een Nederlandse (andere) versie van Fly On The Wings Of Love van The Olsen Brothers van het Songfestival 2000, van Denemarken. .
Misschien post ik m wel. .
Hoi.
pi_17041737
WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU
OW NO
YOU ARE
OW NO
AAAAAAAAAAAAARGH
WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU
OW NO
FUCK OFF
OW NO
AAAAAAAAAAAAARGH
feest
pi_17042258
quote:
Op maandag 9 februari 2004 21:58 schreef Big_Boss_Man het volgende:
WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU
OW NO
YOU ARE
OW NO
AAAAAAAAAAAAARGH
WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU
OW NO
FUCK OFF
OW NO
AAAAAAAAAAAAARGH
pakkend, met name de coupletten... werk nog wat aan het refrein zou ik zeggen, huur een hiphopeikel in, zet er slechte muziek onder en wordt vervolgens rijk...
"You can go with the flow, you can say it doesn't matter, matter anymore. You can go with the flow, do you believe it in your head?"
pi_17042671
Serieus graag BBM...
  maandag 9 februari 2004 @ 22:55:42 #9
44745 Ixnay
On The Hombre
pi_17044083
* Ixnay wacht op de teksten van VAC.
pi_17044173
"All The Same"

We are but dolls of flesh
We fake our happiness
Hearts caged by grave unrest
Fear chains us until death

I long to love,
sweet loneliness

Born without a reason on a long forgotten night
Life abundant, so redundant, yet I remain
Exist as I'm supposed to, to the standards I abide
But for every sense not shunned, I am in pain

Why, is all life, a mere struggle to survive
A billion hands, just holding on to what they'll leave behind
To be, is that all there is to our humanity
In the end, will we suffer or be free?

Yearning for clarity
In every troubled stream
My world making sense
An unimaginable dream
Share all fate, have no faith
Every second
Comes too late
Not a soul that will remember what we've been
It's all the same to everyone who's seen

Why, is all life, an ending struggle to survive
A billion voices, dying memories to the ones they left behind
Not to be, is that how it ends for all humanity
Is it really all the same for you and me?

Why, did my life, lose all value over time
Am I destined to be worthless, is no feeling really mine?
Is there joy in being part of this cursed humanity
If it's all the same why don't you cry, like me?

Yearning for clarity
In every troubled stream
My world making sense
An unimaginable dream
Share my fate, let's have faith
Let's join hands, it's not too late
Together we'll remember every wasted day (let's waste this day)
It's all the same to all of us, anyway
All the same to all of us, anyway

  maandag 9 februari 2004 @ 23:07:13 #11
24054 search64
Avec le grande
pi_17044511
//
Translucent butterflying over me
And moving to the west,

My angelheart was there I know
My love she is the best,

Being small is great its true
Underestimated by the rest,

And I play for her, I care
But for her its just a jest,

My love I pledge to her, its real
And my only guess,

I dreamt I slept with her last night
But still my lifes a mess,

A simple kiss is all it takes
My feelings wont be less,

But still I feel this aching heart
and is it worth it, yes.

"He who makes a beast of himself, gets rid of the pain of being a man."
pi_17044895
aardige tekst, jammer dat het zoveel rijmt... niet mijn voorkeur, maar toch: goed bezig
"You can go with the flow, you can say it doesn't matter, matter anymore. You can go with the flow, do you believe it in your head?"
pi_17045086
1tje van mij.. denk er maar een goede gitaarriff onder, misschien klinkt het dan beter...


-To leave, left, gone-

The door is closed
Its left behind
No more pain
Theres nothing left to lose

Ive never liked you
One big mistake
No more pain
Theres nothing left to lose

When Im gone, Im gone for good
No more time, Im on the move

Try to forget
That I still desire
Cant stand the pain
Theres nothing left to live for

"You can go with the flow, you can say it doesn't matter, matter anymore. You can go with the flow, do you believe it in your head?"
pi_17045627
1
Your Life can crash down like a plane
Burning down being in a flame
Feeling locked up in a prison
Hiding in the dark without a mission

The human race destroys itself
Falling down on the shelf
Being just one of them all
Who'll find death on the call

Our Purposes fall in sorrow
We act like there's no tommorow
Hatred is making us dependents
In a world without any descendents

Never Neverrrrr!
It is never gonna end
We've got our world
No more mistakes
---------------------------

2
This is called the happy song
Love hate and peace it's all good
I'm really now in the mood
For something that will come by these days
Many people won't understand me
What i'm going through right now

No hateful things are around here
Just joy and peace that it's what about
Stop making each other so fucking crazy
Just go nuts to the Happy song here
For once forget those stupid things
and get crazy

punk =P

  dinsdag 10 februari 2004 @ 03:26:34 #15
24054 search64
Avec le grande
pi_17048845
quote:
Op maandag 9 februari 2004 23:17 schreef BillyMaynardHomme het volgende:
aardige tekst, jammer dat het zoveel rijmt... niet mijn voorkeur, maar toch: goed bezig
Mijn gedichten rijmen wat vaker dan mij liedjes, maar waarom weet ik niet.....
"He who makes a beast of himself, gets rid of the pain of being a man."
pi_17050199
[quote]Op maandag 9 februari 2004 22:58 schreef Kworb het volgende:
"All The Same"

http://home.planet.nl/~vers0280/ , leuke site.


Ok hier is mijne:

Ultrablasphemy it all!


Everyone will think that i do what i do
But i will do everything and more
Surprising everyone for sure
Never a true open mind has been seen
In a instant judged for what he should have been

Behind the glass surely i'm the king of the hill
Saying everyone should be free
I would miss a lot
But Still

I have no idea what to do with your confessions
I won't help the meaningless
With their simple words of violence

Ultrablasphemy it all
Penetrate the person that is small

Let's find utopia
Or some kind of metropia
As pariah , messiah


The man who was never ever there
The man who will not share with me
The man without a care
The man i wan't to be
Should be

Angels are not comming down today
Or the next day
Or anyway

Body without a spirit
Thank you for it

[Dit bericht is gewijzigd door VelvetAcidChrist op 10-02-2004 10:26]

I'm the hardest button to button.
#onz, de vrijhaven.
Self improvement is masturbation.
pi_17054570
Democracy ?

millions of people
no space for air
millions of refugees, but why should we care ?

please Mr. Bureaucrat
be more humane
this doesn't mean your downfall...
(why be so insane ?)

How can we still live on
and ignore their pleas
in a blink of an eye
another person dies
(and I feel responsible)

Look at those people
they don't have a choice
Blinded by oppression, just a smothered voice

Kept down by
authority
and traumatized by war
Refused by a free country
(what's democracy for ?)

How can we still live on
and ignore their pleas
in a blink of an eye
another person dies
(and I feel responsible)

unprotected and rejected
marching on to nowhere
have you ever thought about that
or don't you care ?

pi_17054982
Leuke topic, and leuke liedjes ook

Mijn bijdrage (niet autobiografisch, want ben geen meisje en speel geen instrument):

Girls can rock

when I was fourteen
I went to this shop
I looked at the owner and told
I want a guitar, an electrical one,
cause Im gonna rock
he looked at me and smiled
I could see what he thought
youre a nice girl, but nice girls cant rock

well I got me my Fender
and me and my friends
we started a band
and yeah, we did rock
we went to a bar
the owner, he gave us a chance
but you can guess what he thought
youre all nice girls, but nice girls cant rock

we entered the stage
we told the crowd
were gonna show you some rock
the people, they smiled
by now you get what they thought
but we played our song
they all jumped and cheered
we showed that nice girls, yeah nice girls can rock
yeah nice girls can rock
girls can rock

we recorded our songs
and we went to see
a record company
we got a deal,
but they still made us feel
you know what we felt
now were here playing Glastonbury
and now you all know, that nice girls can rock
yeah nice girls can rock
yeah nice girls can rock
girls can rock

pi_17061344
quote:
Op maandag 9 februari 2004 22:10 schreef BillyMaynardHomme het volgende:

[..]

pakkend, met name de coupletten... werk nog wat aan het refrein zou ik zeggen, huur een hiphopeikel in, zet er slechte muziek onder en wordt vervolgens rijk...


Nee man, hard rock.
feest
pi_17061353
quote:
Op maandag 9 februari 2004 22:19 schreef Seborik het volgende:
Serieus graag BBM...
Moeilijke vraag, maar ik zal het proberen!
feest
pi_17061490
En hier een van mijn teksten:

Despair

Ive been waiting and now the time has come to not be insensitive
Please teach me all that by myself I could not comprehend
Desolation turned to despair / please show me how not to fear
Show me how to fucking care
Call me sweet and cute
Thats just one side of me
You dont know what I used to be

I can rememberno one ever cared for me
I never wanted thisalways wanted to please you
I can rememberalways wanted to disappear
I never dreamt of thissomeone who actually cared

So much has happened
Regret cannot change the past
Many promises
Broken promises

But I waited
Desolation turned to despair
But I waited

Blackball, the new disease!
pi_17063643
It may look Like I'm doing bad,
Well I'm not really sad
I'm just screwed up in the head

It may look like I still cry
But all I do is sigh
Shrug my shoulders, say goodbye

You think I want it all to stay the same
So you are not to blame
But I know everything changes

But I'm alright, I'm high above
And I'm not down at all

I am alright on my own
I will make it all alone
I might look a bit diseased
but you will never get me on my knees
Yeah it's easy on my own
Gonna do it all alone
I might be sad every now and then
But you will never get me down again

It's been a while since you've seen me
But this is really me
I hope I'm what you want to see

But even if I'm not at all
I want you to just take it all
Or leave me here alone

'cause I'm alright, I'm high above
and I'm not down at all

I am alright on my own
I will make it all alone
I might look a bit diseased
but you will never get me on my knees
Yeah it's easy on my own
Gonna do it all alone
I might be sad every now and then
But you will never get me down again


I've just been away a while
spend some time on the other side
to watch the puppets play their scene
And I will not deny that I was wrong
But the puppets played a real sad song
I just tell you where i've been


and I'm alright, I'm high above
and I'm not down at all

I am alright on my own
I will make it all alone
I might look a bit diseased
but you will never get me on my knees
Yeah it's easy on my own
Gonna do it all alone
I might be sad every now and then
But you will never get me down again
Yeah it's easy on my own
Have to do it all alone
I may have been someone great back then
Yet I will never be the same again

" And if I don't make it, know that I loved you all along "
pi_17063723
Burned

Sun burning on my skin
Life has been broken from within
It's so hard to adore when I'm not able to explore
My feelings for which no one seems to care
Please tell me why you're never there
For me...

Silence just keeps crying
And I don't hear a thing
My feelings just keep dying
But I don't feel a thing

Sun burning in my eyes
The truth, I'm sure, whill never lie
But how I wish that wasn't true now there is so much left to do
Just one day I want nothing left to fear
Please tell me why you're never here
With me...

Silence just keeps crying
And I don't hear a thing
My feelings just keep dying
But I don't feel a thing

" And if I don't make it, know that I loved you all along "
pi_17063751
Tear apart
Turn away
Steal my heart
Turn away

Please come back
Turn away
Turn

Take me in
Turn away
Be my sin
Go away

Let me live
Turn away
turn

Little demon
Get out of my head
I'm feeling so
Incredibly...

Sad and sour
Turn away
Not this hour
Not today

Crashed and burnded
Turn away
Turn

Little demon
Get out of my head
I'm feeling so
Incredibly...


Sorry, het is misschien een beetje een overflow, maar dan hebben we ze gelijk maar gehad

" And if I don't make it, know that I loved you all along "
pi_17064263
I walk away of all the pain
You left me lying here alone
Don't wanna see
Don't wanna know
What all of this is for
Please let me be
The way I am
Just all alone
Without a friend
Don't call my name
Don't look at me
I don't want you sympathy

Don't wanna change
Don't wanna be
The perfect girl
That's in you dreams

I'm a loser, I'm a nothing
But I feel like I am something
Don't wanna be a moviestar
Don't wanna drive some stupid car

I'm a loser, that's okay
I feel fine, No need to change
As long as you don't bother me
I'm a loser but I'm free

You always want to come around
But your opinion doesn't count
You always tell me what to do
But I can't hear, Don't have a clue

Finally, Now we can see
You're such a loser just like me
Don't try to run, or try to hide
Cause this is all that you can be

I'm a loser, I'm a nothing
But I feel like I am something
There is nothing you can be
You're so pathetic just like me

<--- Hmm, is al redelijk oud, maar goed..

It's hypocritical of you, do as you say, not as you do.
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